attemptedperfection's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[-[ Oh God ]-]

hahaha!

I love this. I don't know why, but I do.

[Euphoric]

it's not so bad

quite clever actually. I definitely enjoyed listening to it.

poopr1221 responds:

why thank you ! i still think i used that sytrus guitar WAY too much.

[trouble on my mind]

very nice

doesn't sound like you need much advice at all! only thing I'd really like to hear different is a real piano... if you could do that, this track would be golden.

jcorishas responds:

I appreciate the review. I might add a real piano to beginning maybe as an overdub.

[==(Floating Iron)==]

ups & downs

Hmm... it's a little repetitive for a while there... but then, the last reviewer already said that. And then, when the bells come in, they're a little on the loud side. Also, the drums could use a little more oomph... though I dug the toms... especially when the ambient synths & bells come in. That bass is pretty cool too. For a first effort though, I'd say this is pretty impressive. Nice work.

[BlkAce: ~Marvel~]

'tis good

I feel like it wanted to go somewhere... but didn't quite make it there. Feels incomplete. I like the bass though; good stuff. Plus, it does loop quite well.

BlkAce responds:

haha thanks for the review!

[HRM Contest: BlkAce: Smooth]

hey

I like this... mind if I use it?

BlkAce responds:

lol..sure ^_^

[LP - Plunder the Galaxy]

Fantastic.

True story, I went to a punk show this evening, and there was a band called "The Johnny Earthquake Band," and their lead singer was, in fact, a pirate. Like, if you saw him walking down the street, you'd say, "oh my god, it's a fucking pirate!" At any rate, this a very lengthy, intricate work, and must have taken you a good amount of time and effort. That said, I'm giving you a zero. ...naw, only kidding. ten.

[Housing]

It's not bad...

It's a bit repetitive, but then it's house, so I guess it's supposed to be. I'm not a fan of parallel condensed chords either; it tends to sound a bit amateurish... maybe try spreading out the notes a little more. For example, e-c-g instead of c-e-g. Then again, maybe that would take away from the house-ish feel of it. Either way, this sounds good enough, if a bit sparse on depth, but I certainly wouldn't say you failed.