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I think you mean "New Age" haha...

New Wave is something completely different... maybe that's why it was getting such a low score... :P
But this is a very nice composition; very soothing/spiritual and such. Good work!

ErikMcClure responds:

It is new age...

But hey, newgrounds doesn't have new age! So into New Wave it goes... xD

Thanks :)

not bad

It's true that live instruments don't get nearly as much representation on this website, but that doesn't mean I'm going to give a 10 to a cover song. That said, I really like the tone of the guitar, and your voice, while not perfect tonally, expresses a good amount of emotion. Nice job. Although I don't know what you meant by your comments as I'm a guitarist, and I've never heard or played this song. *shrugs*

Naitzmic responds:

Hhe, thanks.
Yeah, I can understand that about it being a cover song.
You really should listen to this song though (the original).
As a guitarist, you owe it to yourself.

wow

I'd say this is the best I've heard from you... and I've heard a lot of excelent work. I especially like the quieter section after 3:00... brilliant work. Seriously, like that other guy said, come out with an album; I can guarantee you I'd get it some airplay.

snoballandthmonyshot responds:

nice, send me all the air you gots:/
;ped

nice

The melodies seem a bit chaotic at times, meandering off wherever they want...
You should try keeping them a little more in line; tell them they'll go to bed without supper if'n they wander off again. ...or something. ...I dunno.
Seriously though, nice work; very well produced.

Twistedtechnology responds:

Yea...melodies.....you know how they can get...rowdy little bastards.. Hmm, they didnt seem all that chaotic to me though, but thats prolly cuz i was half awake when i finished em. Either way, im really glad you liked the track, i put a lot of effort into this one XD

Thanks alot for the review and the good scores!!!

I like that no supper idea XD

~Twistedtechnology

not bad

that lead synth is a little loud...
other than that, not bad at all
nice use of panning

nice

This is really good...
It's repetetive, but at the same time, it evolves, so it's alright.
would work great as background music for a game or a menu or something...
loops pretty well too
nice job

Jimbobsthebest responds:

Your absolutely right. This song is extremely repetitive. But the problem is, i'm not sure what to do with it. I really don't know where to take it.

Anyway thank you very much for the review. It's greatly appreciated.

James

nice composition

can't hear anything wrong with it...
would fit quite nicely in some rpg...
I can just picture a night scene, reading dialogue bubbles over it, while the characters stand in some serene, mystical meadow or something...
...I dunno, it's good.

niiice

see, I don't download anything unless I really, really like it.
I downloaded this.
I'd say... top 5?
good luck!

Rig responds:

Well thank you good sir. Share it with all your friends ;)

nice

Hey, congrats on getting "best of the week"
I can definitely hear the effort in this...
great work!
although I do prefer to hear a live band with music like this...
especially since the high production values in the instruments seem to contrast a little with the acoustics of the vocal recording... nothing an insanely-expensive microphone can't fix, right? :P
great work though; hope she loved it.

jnry3 responds:

She loved it (although I'm still trying to tweak the heck out of it). ^_^

Reason pawns my $10 microphone, haha! I do wish I both have a live band and a professional-grade microphone.

Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review and rating!

good, good

I have a sneaking suspicion that last guy was talking about me... haha
at any rate, this is top-notch; superbly constructed, excelently produced, and downright enjoyable to listen to. The voices especially add a nice touch.

LJCoffee responds:

lol - Thanks for the comments. I see you've entered the Nov. MAC - good luck!

Oh Yoshimi, they don't believe me, but you won't let those robots eat me...

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