attemptedperfection's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[DJ~NAvI- Kill Kool krispy krak]

interesting

...but lacking. The song felt like a buildup with no release.

[Deliberations]

yeesh

For God's sake, man, work on your rhythms! You have the talent; the potential is there, you just need to work on it.

RadRacer responds:

hmmm, I thought it went good, maybe a little slow at parts but I liked that. O well

[Play:]

Oh man...

I was groovin' to this one. Well done. I love the weird stuff, and, though this one wasn't exceptionally weird, it still held its own in other ways.

[V-Trance]

It lacks something...

...but, since that something is a very small something, I gave you a 10. You need to fix your DLs, though.

DJ-Dajova responds:

:P ty... Well, I´m still learning how to make good music, so I´m glad to all kinds of reviews :D

[-WV- Rebirth(Final)]

Holy sh*t, dude.

That's all I have to say.

MattBlair responds:

Thx. Thas all I have to say. No really, thx.

-WV-

[Chaos Realisation]

Jumpy

You have some great ideas here. "Great" as in "awesomeishly kick-ass." However, you didn't fit together these awesomeishly kick-ass ideas in such a way as would allow them to congeal into an awesomeishly kick-ass song. I shall convey unto you the advice once given to me by a man of great wisdom: "Good songs start with a theme and evolve with it." There's a time and a place for everything, but I think this would have made a much better piece of music if you didn't jump the song around all over the place.

FlashChild responds:

Thanks, those are pretty awesome words there. ill take all of that on in my next pieces. this piece unlike the others i kinda put togeteher just coz i was kinda bored. did you notice that i had a pattern going. it was one loop repeated twice throughout the whole thing just changing the harmonic values on the second one. the program i got is fairly basic but contains loads of loops that you can change and rearange. thanks for the review and bear in mind im only thirteen so my pieces wont be truly amazing for a while, well not until i can afford sum really decent software. thanks anyway

[Somnolent]

Nice.

This is really good. Simple, but effective. In fact, upon listeing a second time, I'd venture as far as to say this kicks ass. Well done.

Diabolo-ical responds:

Thanks very much.