attemptedperfection's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[-MrMaestro-Divination [Remix]]

'tis good

The drums are fantastic. However, there's just something about that synth-bass line that seems... not good. Maybe if you used the notes more sparsely, it would sound better to these ears. I dunno. Still a very solid track.

DavidOrr responds:

hmm yea, I threw that together very quickly- maybe I will go back and redo it :)

[Battered Senses(1min34sec)demo]

'tis good

You know, I have a song called "Injured Senses" on my experimental project's upcoming album...

AAaaanyway, this is rather good, though short and slightly repetitive. I love how the bassline fades down when the drums come in, and how the drums cut out to allow the melody line (for lack of a better term) to fade in... All in all, this is very well constructed for such a short track. I'd love to hear this one further developed.

AdmiralConquistador responds:

Yea it's short and repetitive, I just wanted to get a quick little demo out on NG to whet everyone's appetite for the final... don't worry I'm going to develop it :)

-ac-

[_-=[Burning My Angel]=-_]

*sits back and eats popcorn while watching song*

Muy bien, señor;
muy bien.

[_-=[Flying Unmatched]=-*FIXED*]

I envy you.

Audio on a front page flash? Damn, man. You deserve it, though; this is one kick-ass track. Can't wait to here your church hymns.

MaestroSorrow responds:

hee, if I can just find some really GOOD ones, everything I've found to date, kinda suck... is it too much to ask Santa for a good choir for my own!!!

Thnx for the review ^^.

[No Mo Drugs!]

It's very short...

...but it's good.
I don't know why...
I just can't stop looping it...

MarioMusicMaker3 responds:

i did spend a lot of time on it (25 min) and i thought it was cool to, thankyou for review!

[Theme of the dead--_--]

Awesome.

It's as simple as that.

PERVOK responds:

Awesome review.
Simple as that, too ;)

Thanks!

[Restaurant___]

wow

Your tracks are all truely kick-ass. I 5'd them all, and they all deserve it. My only problem with this one is that there are no female voices... I think if you're going to have a crowded restaurant, you need some female voices in there. Even so, the fact didn't occur to me until the second time through, so it's not blatantly obvious.
Musically, the piano is very well-recorded; very professional-sounding. The style is of course nothing new, but still well-done.
I look forward to hearing more from you.

JohnFloyd responds:

Sadly, one of the skills in which I am seriously lacking is being able to speak in a female-sounding voice. This wasn't really a problem until recently, when all of the sudden I had to pretend to be an entire restaurant, all by myself... Anyway, thanks for the comment!

[I Have A Spatula]

I love it.

Simply fantastic.
Perhaps you would enjoy my "eggs are yummy" song.
It's got the same sort of wierd-techno-humor to it.
This is awesome, though.
I predict this song will go gold by tomorrow.
Just watch.

[Intakt - Equilibrium]

'tis good

I hope the out-of-synch-ish-ness was intentional, because it was enjoyable.
I'll give you the benefit of the doubt.
Well done.

Intakt responds:

lol
i dont know why it turned out that way.
thanks for thr review