attemptedperfection's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Under the moon]

wow.

Is this all you?
either way, nice work.

Zi3ntar responds:

Hey Thank you !!
... Yes. This is all me!

o_0 ?

[In Honor of Old!]

good stuff

I was sitting in suspense, hoping that you wouldn't hit that last note... hoping you would leave it be on that beautiful third, letting the song end in somewhat-incomplete perfection... and then you hit it! Aaargh!
Great work, overall, though. It's also nice to hear something hand-played; it's almost a lost art here on NG... The production leaves a little to be desired, but I've never been one to let production interfere with music appreciation.
5/5

CutMan16 responds:

Heheheh....Thank you!
Yes, I know of the "imcomplete perfection" you speak of, but I felt I just had to add that last note to symbolize that the legacy of my old keyboard had been completed. Relax, dude. I have other songs that implement the incomplete perfection method.....quite nicely, too. I'll try uploading some new ones in a few days, but school-work continues to pile on me. Ah well. Thanks for your review!

[_-=[Waltzing with Madness]=-_]

nice.

Well, I certainly see how someone would have to be mad to waltz to this... I can almost see the mental cases attempting to dance with eachother to this music... that's a sad picture... and yet, so very funny...

MaestroSorrow responds:

XD, you've single handidly wiped out all the "serious" images that were swimming in my head X_x. When I expand this song now, its going to sound so wierd!

Still, loved the image, quite entertaining. Thanks for the review ^^.

[They're Their Friends There]

right thurr

I like that you used propper grammar, which is a lost art in itself. The song is great too; weird sh*t is the best kind of music. Well done, good sir.

Laiderdaiv responds:

It's an easy sentance to remember the spelling of each thurrr. I donno, I like using propper grammer...for the most part. I guess I kuhd saiv sum strain on my keebord. It's easier to read anyways, and most people catch on to what you're talking about to even notice.

[DJ Runaway - Acid Stab]

wow.

Well, I was going to review Distorted Reality, but then I clicked on this one... They're both great tracks, but this one's got much more "oomph" to it. This is one of the best tracks I've heard on the AP, and I've listened to quite a few in my relatively short time here. Awesome work.

DJRunaway responds:

*BLUSHBLUSHBLUSH!* Thanks for the review man! I saw your song on the fp some time ago... congratz! I'm diggin' your musical style and I advice everyone who reads this to listen to attemptedperfection's music; it's really cool!

Greetz,
Runaway

[Paradise on E ZENON REMIX]

good stuff

I'm gonna have to disagree with MrMaestro and say that the tempo changes were a nice touch. Well done overall; this track has some great moments.

PERVOK responds:

Thanks you sir, for the kind and generous review!

[Lessingness]

k...

well... I don't really think this falls under trance... and it doesn't sound like much of a "beat"... but as far as ambient electronica goes, it's a'ight. nice chords. but short. really short.

UnknownFear responds:

Thanks. I am going to make more but longer ones.

-MortalExistence

[-MrMaestro- My Vision]

more good stuff

This is a great, solid trance track. Except for the vocals. Those were a little corny. Let the music speak for itself! it's more than capable in this case. My favorite part is when the high piano comes in with the stuttering bass drum rhythm underneath... genius stuff...

[.:.:.FuturisticMovment.:.:.]

hmm...

It sounds at once amatuerish and professional... leading me to believe that your loops may have been pre-made... but I won't jump to conclusions. It's a relatively decent track, but for the recording levels, which are way too high, causing distortion, which adds to that amatuer-ish air I was talking about... anyway, it's different, and different is good.

UnknownFear responds:

Thank you for reviewing my audio submission. No, these loops were not pre-made. The beats, however, came with FruityLopps. I just messed around with the beats and the outcome was not all that bad.

Thanks for calling it a "decent" track.

-MortalExistence

[-=LJC=- ILL]

...I can't feel my ears...

This song takes the adjective "trippy" to a whole new level. Awesome work.

LJCoffee responds:

thank you. I'm glad that it's gotten a few listens. The problem with putting this track on NG is that I feel too many people will say "screwititsucks" and move on before they even get a few bars into it.

That isn't really a problem but you know how the typical NG crowd is... If they're not hit right in the face by an immediate froth of 4x4 Techno then they lose interest and never bother to hear any of the work that comes only 4 bars later.

Hitting up front like that is fine, don't get me wrong, it lets people know what the song is all about right away - but I like the idea of *almost* losing them and then trying to hook them right at the last second. If only I could get that down correctly...

I appreciate the review and the vote!

See you around.