attemptedperfection's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Khuskan - Presto]

arrrg, matey

'tis a fine tune indeed... if ye be a pirate! ...an' ot'erwise as well. yarrrg...

Khuskan responds:

Yarrrr indeed me'hartey!

[Universal Destruction--_--FULL]

...what just happened?

Excellent use of awesomeness... I mean filters... or something... I think I see my brain lying on the floor over there...

PERVOK responds:

That seriously cant be good. Get that checked out or something.

Thanks for the review!

[Someone to love]

very jazy

The quality is lacking, but it sounds like this is only temporary. The music, on the other hand, is awesome. Very dissonant, very jazzy, very well-thought-out. There were a couple places where I felt like the melody went off on its own without the harmonies following it... specifically somewhere in the beginning, I think... but perhaps that will sound better with voices; it just sounded somewhat awkward in this context. Overall, very interesting... certain aspects need a little work, but it has a lot of potential. 4/5

WinTang responds:

Yeah :) as I tried to explain in the insufficient comments space, this is a MIDI-version of a song I will submit in 5-voice close harmony... I'm glad you reviewed it and liked the idea, and now I can post the lyrics:

SOMEONE TO LOVE

(Someone) to, (someone) to, someone to love

Someone to love, and make me complete
Someone to love, it would be so neat

Someone that wears a thong
And tells my all night long
That I'm so sexy in my geek pants

Someone that will agree
to oral sex on me
three times a week - including weekends

Someone to love (someone to love)
someone to love (someone to love)

Is there someone? (Wait and see)
Will there be someone waiting? (Don't ask me)
Will she give me that disease, (which one again?)
the one with the burning sensation when you pee?

Even if she gives me gonorrhea
I can't wait to see her
My someone to, my someone to, my someone to love.

[Underworld--_--]

that first review made me laugh my ass off

what an asshole...
XD
great song. nice change of pace. very groovy.

PERVOK responds:

Yeah i know, I hate myself.
Damn z3n0n, damn you to hell :P

Thanks for the review!

[Break-In]

good stuff

I highly enjoyed this. The drums are awesome, the synths are alright, and I disagree with the first reviewer; I think that last note was great, especially how it just kinda shrugged itself off at the end. I also disagree with the second reviewer; the dissonant harmonies added a lot of character to the song. Plus, I love dissonance in general. It sounds like that metalic pedal tone is being played by hand, correct? I think it may be a little off-beat at times, and the volume varies... you may want to record the sound as a sample and use it in whatever software you made the rest with.
This is a short song, but it has a good deal of potential, so I'll give it a 4. Nice work; I look forward to hearing more.

itsameyayo responds:

Thanks for the positive review. Yes, the metallic pad was on a piano, not sure if it was called that though...

-The drums we're loops on the piano, but as for my contest song for February, which is "Friends Again?", I used my drumset skills to play on a drumset for the song. So yeah, to sum it up, I'm dying to get a comp. programs like Acid or Reason.

-Thanks for the review, hope you're doing great!

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[Infection]

awsome.

I'm honored to be sharing the front page with you; the groove in this song is so thick, you could cut it with a spatula. awesome stuff.

Karbon responds:

Wait, I don't think I see you, lol. But anyways. You make my groove yummy, I want to eat my groove now. ;)

[Daimoon]

good stuff

A lot of the parts are out of tune with one another (like those weird bongo sounds), but I'm guessing that was intentional, in which case, well done. The intro made good use of the tried-and-true adding-parts-sequentially-on-top-of-other-parts method. The drums were nice, the melodies and harmonies were nice, the ending was nice. Overall, a rather creepy feel due to the previously mentioned out-of-tune-ed-ness, and yet upbeat at the same time. Nice work.

WinTang responds:

Yep, you guessed right :) all the bitonality and what not is intentional.
Especially the part after Overall made my very happy as this was what I intended. Cheers!

[Be that way (5:31)]

more good stuff!

You, sir, have talent. Once again, the only thing I can suggest is working on the production (which I can understand is difficult when you don't have thousands of dollars to spend on equipment). I'd love to hear what you have to say about my song, "Pop My Words with your Teeth," since it's a similar one-man band kinda thing, and also switches between sweet and sour.

WinTang responds:

I didn't do the mixing myself, but it was a bit of a rushed recording - we had to record seven songs in one day.
Thanks for the appreciation again. You know I love your stuff, so I like having you review me :)

[Aeronaut]

great stuff

It's a little too unpolished (and short) for me to choose it to play at the station, but the performance and composition are fantastic. well done.

WinTang responds:

No problem. I'm too cool for your radio station anyway :)
Thanks a lot for the review.

[Mainstream]

blimey! that's some tasty drumwork.

I envy those drums... did you record them yourself? Self-recorded, self-spliced drums are definately the most rewarding kind... Very nice work either way.

R3ACT10N responds:

actually, no i didnt record them.
i downloaded them at a free(ware) drum loop site =)

im so glad i got them. However, i did splice them myself. Took a while.. but it was worth it!

thanks for the review!