attemptedperfection's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dr. Awesome's Musical Bonanza]

Good

As has been said, you have much potential. Your melodies and harmonies are nice and complex; they're a bit disoriented at times, but these times are few and far between, and the rest certainly makes up for it. I'm liking that snare as well; its subtlety is a really nice element, and I would've liked to have heard more of it, or, come to think of it, I would've liked to have heard more percussion in general. Well-done, though; I'll be paying attention to your future work.

zerojester responds:

I'm glad you like the track. I'll hopefully be releasing more very soon.

[Deep Acid]

Your melodies are rather strange...

I LOVE strange.
well-done.
I saw a comment a few posts down saying you shouldn't rush to submit a song; I have that problem too. I don't see anything wrong with this song, though. 'tis good indeed.

[God$peed - L-HCSA]

'tis good

gotta love those strings.
this song moves along very nicely.
you, sir, have an ear for song progression.
well-done.

GodSpeedIam responds:

Thanks. This is one of my favorites. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Slice it up v.1]

'tis good.

most enjoyable.

Xiro responds:

I haven't really gotten much of my music otu there yet, except to my friends, so I really haven't had much unbiased input.

Thank you much!

[Shoot Out]

it's very...

short...

[AznPB - Halt!]

'tis good.

most suggestions I'd have are merely of personal preference, but longer would've been good.

AznPB responds:

You think making it longer would've improved it? I suppose so. There's a lot I could've still done to the track. But once I render an .mp3, I'm done! :P I never look at the .flp until a year later to see if I can remake it into something better. ;) Thanks.

[JAG~Beat-a-phex]

very a-phex-ish

'tis good stuff.

beatmasterJAG responds:

Thank you :)

[Happy Plucking]

pretty damn good

not perfect, but pretty damn good.

[Classic Jazz [DEMO]]

good... but not enough

It get's a nice steady pulse going by the end.
It's a shame you didn't evolve the song a bit more.
I'd say you should definately work off this one; it's got much potential.

[Flexy Walls.]

'tis good.

'tis good indeed.

the-postal-dude responds:

Thank's pal.