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hahaha!

I love this. I don't know why, but I do.

it's not so bad

quite clever actually. I definitely enjoyed listening to it.

poopr1221 responds:

why thank you ! i still think i used that sytrus guitar WAY too much.

good stuff

this would probably loop better if it didn't feel so much as if it were building up to something bigger... very nice sounds though, and a great arrangement.

MJTTOMB-Loops responds:

Yeah, I admit that I should have done better with the loop part, but oh well, I guess I'll do that next time. Thanks for reviewing!

very nice

doesn't sound like you need much advice at all! only thing I'd really like to hear different is a real piano... if you could do that, this track would be golden.

jcorishas responds:

I appreciate the review. I might add a real piano to beginning maybe as an overdub.

ups & downs

Hmm... it's a little repetitive for a while there... but then, the last reviewer already said that. And then, when the bells come in, they're a little on the loud side. Also, the drums could use a little more oomph... though I dug the toms... especially when the ambient synths & bells come in. That bass is pretty cool too. For a first effort though, I'd say this is pretty impressive. Nice work.

'tis good

I feel like it wanted to go somewhere... but didn't quite make it there. Feels incomplete. I like the bass though; good stuff. Plus, it does loop quite well.

BlkAce responds:

haha thanks for the review!

hey

I like this... mind if I use it?

BlkAce responds:

lol..sure ^_^

Fantastic.

True story, I went to a punk show this evening, and there was a band called "The Johnny Earthquake Band," and their lead singer was, in fact, a pirate. Like, if you saw him walking down the street, you'd say, "oh my god, it's a fucking pirate!" At any rate, this a very lengthy, intricate work, and must have taken you a good amount of time and effort. That said, I'm giving you a zero. ...naw, only kidding. ten.

It's not bad...

It's a bit repetitive, but then it's house, so I guess it's supposed to be. I'm not a fan of parallel condensed chords either; it tends to sound a bit amateurish... maybe try spreading out the notes a little more. For example, e-c-g instead of c-e-g. Then again, maybe that would take away from the house-ish feel of it. Either way, this sounds good enough, if a bit sparse on depth, but I certainly wouldn't say you failed.

Ha! 100th download

Very nice work, this one. Very very nice. Actually, no; this is fantastic. Very very fantastic. I'ma go listen again even. And by "go" I mean "stay right here." Because it's already started over. Very very cool.

Glib responds:

thanks :)

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